the bridge at dusk | Write Out Loud

the bridge at dusk | Write Out Loud

The Bridge at Dusk


They met where the old stone path

dropped toward the river bend,

light thinning, air sharp enough

to make every breath feel earned.

Neither had planned its timing.

Both arrived as if summoned

by the same stubborn thought.

So you came.”

The voice carried more grit than welcome.

Aye. Someone had to.”

A shrug, half‑defensive, half‑defiant.

Wind pressed between them

like a third participant

waiting for the first misstep.

They stood there, two figures

carved by long weather,

each convinced the other

had stepped away first.

Old loyalty sat heavy

beneath their ribs,

but pride held the reins.

               “You vanished.”

You stopped asking.”

               “You pushed.”

You pulled.”

The quarrel rose quick,

a flare of flint on flint.

Hands gestured sharply,

boots scraped gravel,

and for a moment it seemed

they might walk off

in opposite directions

and let the river claim the rest.

But something shifted.

Not softened — shifted.

A realisation landing

like a stone in the gut:

they were fighting

but why they still care?

One exhaled first.

A long, tired breath

that wasn’t quite surrender

but wasn’t defiance either.

I thought you’d turned away.”

The words came low,

as if dragged from a locked drawer.

I thought the same of you.”

A reply without armour.

The wind eased.

The river kept its steady run.

They stood shoulder to shoulder,

not touching, not speaking,

just letting the quiet

do what their pride could not.

When they finally walked back

toward the path,

nothing grand was declared.

No speeches.

No tidy moral.

Just two figures moving

in the same direction again,

step for step,

letting the evening

carry the rest.

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