Competition success | Write Out Loud

Competition success | Write Out Loud

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I am delighted to have been commended in the Buzzwords open poetry competition with this poem:

 

Master of Female Half-Lengths

 

I’ve got my eye

on the three musical ladies

by an unknown Dutch artist

of the sixteenth century,

but I don’t know where it will go.

Not above the chest of drawers 

which serve as a mantlepiece 

for your oval mirror 

with a chip in the glass

hangs there. Not next to 

the table where the three

Bronte sisters used to hang,

the obvious place

had not Shirley’s butterfly painting 

replaced it. Nor above

the settee where the pink snake

with a purple bird in its mouth,

designed by you but

embroidered by your mother

has settled. Above my bed

there’s your gift to your in-laws,

a picture of flowers.

 

Why do I want it, you might say.

It’s one of my earliest memories 

of Cedar Lodge, where it hung

above the counter

not opposite, as it did

when you moved 

to Queen Anne’s Drive.

 

It’s the second time I have been successful in this competition when Penelope Shuttle has judged it. I was especially pleased to have been commended as I realised after sending the poem that I  had made an error in a detail in the attached picture. 

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